An unhappy shape shifter can be a dangerous companion....
It's Frisky Friday, and for A Writer's Naughty Thoughts, Fridays are also anything can happen days.
My excerpt for this week is from my 2nd book, Deadly Enchantment. A shapeshifting wizard romance set in Victorian England published by New Concepts Publishing,
In this snippet, which occurs at the beginning of the third chapter, Dominic Westcroft has reason to suspect Serena Blanford, one of the guests his sister has invited for him to consider as a potential bride, possesses magical abilities she's trying to keep hidden. Believing she may actually be a plant placed in his home by his treacherous brother, he decides to give her a purity validation test.
Serena has no idea what this "test" actually entails, but given the reaction of the other women who went through it, she knew it wasn't anything she wanted to experience. Up until this point, she has successfully managed to keep both her and her cousin safe from having to undergo the ordeal, but now Westcroft is adamant they both submit. When Serena declines, he advises his servant she will be leaving first thing in the morning. Knowing if she's sent away that she'll never be able to solve the mystery surrounding her sister's death, Serena agrees to have her purity "validated". However, as they approach the room where the testing is taking place, Serena hears her cousin crying. She rushes in to comfort Allison only to learn a man had forced her cousin to drink a potion, which was in effect a truth serum for the spirit intended to expose those who intend harm through deceit. When Serena discovers the gentleman who attended Allison was not only Westcroft's brother-in-law, but a physician as well, she isn't the least bit reassured.
Serena has no idea what this "test" actually entails, but given the reaction of the other women who went through it, she knew it wasn't anything she wanted to experience. Up until this point, she has successfully managed to keep both her and her cousin safe from having to undergo the ordeal, but now Westcroft is adamant they both submit. When Serena declines, he advises his servant she will be leaving first thing in the morning. Knowing if she's sent away that she'll never be able to solve the mystery surrounding her sister's death, Serena agrees to have her purity "validated". However, as they approach the room where the testing is taking place, Serena hears her cousin crying. She rushes in to comfort Allison only to learn a man had forced her cousin to drink a potion, which was in effect a truth serum for the spirit intended to expose those who intend harm through deceit. When Serena discovers the gentleman who attended Allison was not only Westcroft's brother-in-law, but a physician as well, she isn't the least bit reassured.
Dominic
kept his gaze fixed on Serena while Regina spoke encouragingly to the cousin
and led her from the room. He had no
idea what he would have done if Serena had asked him to send for
Frederick. Though he had made the offer,
a part of him firmly rejected the notion of another man touching her so
intimately. The strength of his reaction
thoroughly puzzled him. Frederick was a
doctor, and a good one at that, but that knowledge did nothing to ease the knot
that had formed in Dominic’s stomach.
Needing to
distance himself from Serena for a moment, he stepped over to a basin and
washed his hands. “Why don’t you recline
back on the divan and try to relax,” he suggested without facing her.
Serena
wanted to ask him if he’d be able to relax had their positions been reversed,
but her lips and tongue were too dry to form the words. Instead, she sat on the sofa-like chair
Allison had occupied just moments before, and asked, “Which trial do you
perform first? The drink or the physical
examination?”
He turned
back to look at her. “Does that matter?”
he inquired evenly.
“I suppose
not,” she answered in a small voice, certain she would fail one if not the
other.
Grabbing a
towel from a nearby rack, he regarded her carefully. “Though Dr. Sinclair is one of the best
physicians in England, he has no magical talents.”
Serena
stared down at her tightly clasped hands.
“What difference would that make to your validation process?”
“Not much,
I suppose,” he replied, rubbing his hands dry.
“Except that I do not need an herb to see into a person’s soul.”
“Oh,” she
answered, not sure if that revelation reassured or unsettled her even more.
“I do not
intend to hurt you, Serena,” he vowed quietly as he put the towel back on the
rack. When she didn’t reply, he firmed
his tone and commanded, “Look at me.”
She
hesitated, then slowly lifted her chin until she evenly met his unblinking
stare. His blue eyes examined her so
intently that his spirit seemed to traverse the space that separated them and
delve into her mind through her eyes.
She wanted to draw back and hide, but she was pinned in place by nothing
more than the strength of his gaze. She
felt trapped and comforted at the same time.
Jittery and calm. Scared and
reassured. Then he closed his eyes,
releasing her from his thrall.
Read the first three chapters at: Deadly Enchantment
Available at NCP, Amazon, Barnes & Noble or ARe
Thanks for visiting. I hope you enjoyed this brief excerpt and wish you and yours a very Frisky Friday.
No comments:
Post a Comment
I love hearing from readers, so thank you for making my day! Writers with any thoughts at all (Naughty or otherwise) love comments, and I'm no exception.