She needed his protection, except he insisted on her honest submission first.
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Welcome to the Saturday Spankings blog hop. My stories are all M/f with the dominant male determined to protect the woman he cares for and loves, or grows to love, by doing whatever it takes to ensure her safety and continued health. This includes administering a spanking when she needs one.
My submission for this week is from my first BDSM novel, A Dom's Dilemma, published by Blushing Books.
In this scene, Jim, a former Texan who by day works as a police detective and by night lives and plays as a Dom, is in the Velvet Chains BDSM medical station attempting to give his new submissive, Kelly Franklin, an anal exam. When Kelly goes ballistic, Jim suspects fear, rather than brattiness, is responsible for her reaction. After giving her repeated opportunities to use her safeword, Jim is left with little choice. She is being disrespectful, defiant and acting like a brat, all of which screams punishment to a Dom.
"I hate to see it come to
this," he murmured, bringing his hand down again.
"No! Please.
I'll behave. I promise," she
pleaded. "I'm sorry for acting out
and disobeying you. Please give me
another chance."
Although the lesson had been light
in number, she'd given him the response he required, so he paused. Listening to her sobs, he felt torn. He hadn't been overly harsh, but he needed to
stay firm. And, since he couldn't let
her get away with calling him names, he flattened his hand on her back. "Twenty more for swearin' and we're
done," he informed her grimly.
"Oooh. Nooo.
I'm sorry. Please don't. Please stop."
"Kelly, you're not listenin' to
me, girl. You deserve much worse than
what I'm givin', which means I expect you to do as a say and count out each
stroke as you take your punishment."
Though Jim can be strict, he likes a bit of spunk in a sub. However, Kelly has crossed a line even he can't permit.
M/F, Kinky happenings in rural Connecticut.
If you're 18 or older, you can read the first three chapters at A Dom's Dilemma
Buy the book directly from Blushing Books, Amazon, ARE
Funny how sometimes submission can be achieved with very little spanking and sometimes it takes a lot. Great insight.
ReplyDeleteIt's such a fuzzy line, when the disciplinarian needs to be firm and when compassion is more suitable. Nice mixture.
ReplyDeleteI love the thoughts of the disciplinarian - his kindness, his softness but his ability to remain what she needs, a disciplinarian. Is it me or is there jus something hot about that word?
ReplyDeleteI like JIm. He’s very in tune with what Kelly needs. Very nice Kathryn :)
ReplyDeleteAs the others have already said, the mix of compassion and dominance is amazing. I almost feel sorry for him rather than her as he passes sentence of another twenty. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteI too like that fine line you have carved out here and I also really like the one line, "he felt torn" - this alone shows so much in his compassion and care for her... ❊
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet:) And doesn't every bottom apologize and say they won't do it again to stop the punishment? *grins* Even if we might know we need more.
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that he is firm without feeling the need to be overly harsh. Another book for my growing list.
ReplyDeleteYes, Jim is great. I love the calm, firm delivery of what he's going to do :) great snippet
ReplyDeleteInteresting dynamic here. He sounds quite forceful, and not willing to put up with much crap.
ReplyDeleteVery nice concept. I look forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteI was finishing up reading the entire post and I saw those awesome covers for your other books. My TBR list just got longer.
ReplyDeleteAngie, those are the words that every author loves to hear. Thank you.
DeleteI like Jim's hesitation followed by resolve. He's got inner strength, perhaps the best trait in a hero.
ReplyDeleteI love it when the heroine is begging and making promises to be good...adds a little extra hotness to the scene for me:) Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteI love Jim. He's stern yet feels bad about the punishment. This shows just how much of a real MAN he is.
ReplyDeleteSounds like Jim has his hands full!
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