tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7655995579826454308.post8211215292999141924..comments2024-02-06T03:52:33.571-05:00Comments on A Writer's Naughty Thoughts: Horny Hump Day - July 11 - Mortal Illusions #HornyHumpDayKathryn R. Blakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15772415563451755090noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7655995579826454308.post-14334743989432466552012-07-11T22:45:09.345-04:002012-07-11T22:45:09.345-04:00I love how she's reduced to begging. Anticipa...I love how she's reduced to begging. Anticipation usually makes it better when it finally happens.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7655995579826454308.post-51018852564124065422012-07-11T15:20:56.597-04:002012-07-11T15:20:56.597-04:00He's definitely in control of this situation! ...He's definitely in control of this situation! Wonder when or if he's going to give in to her pleas. Great tension.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7655995579826454308.post-63792347068999478812012-07-11T13:35:47.628-04:002012-07-11T13:35:47.628-04:00excellent tool to control, bring her to the point ...excellent tool to control, bring her to the point of begging. great selection for this week.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14797792725667139673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7655995579826454308.post-80779607394342715342012-07-11T10:54:37.213-04:002012-07-11T10:54:37.213-04:00Nice; takes the reader to eroticism's darker e...Nice; takes the reader to eroticism's darker edges to find them every bit as desirable as the sweeter places. Reading this, I want to know what happens next.Dark Erotica Author Anthony Bealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17865539371323913610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7655995579826454308.post-63880958306156787502012-07-11T09:51:10.136-04:002012-07-11T09:51:10.136-04:00This is a good piece. I like the "begging&qu...This is a good piece. I like the "begging" angle to create conflict and suspense.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00019869865903220885noreply@blogger.com